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With every beat of your heart,
I can feel mine going numb.
Bit,
By bit,
By bit.
You hold me in your arms,
Yet I cannot feel it.
I am cold,
Like stone.
Frozen.
I can taste your joy and happiness,
Your disbelief that this is really true.
I cannot believe it either.
But not the way you don't,
No...
It makes you happy,
But it makes me sad,
That I cannot feel
Anything at all.
Why is that?
I want to like you.
I do like you.
And yet,
Maybe not enough...
Yet?
Your heart keeps beating,
Loud and fast.
And every beat is like a stab
In my heart.
My unfeeling heart...
I can feel mine going numb.
Bit,
By bit,
By bit.
You hold me in your arms,
Yet I cannot feel it.
I am cold,
Like stone.
Frozen.
I can taste your joy and happiness,
Your disbelief that this is really true.
I cannot believe it either.
But not the way you don't,
No...
It makes you happy,
But it makes me sad,
That I cannot feel
Anything at all.
Why is that?
I want to like you.
I do like you.
And yet,
Maybe not enough...
Yet?
Your heart keeps beating,
Loud and fast.
And every beat is like a stab
In my heart.
My unfeeling heart...
For the Live-Love-Write writing prompt ^^
Update:
Sooo, because Rayen told me to, I recorded some of my poetry stuff and this( youtu.be/Ssdn7i_2urQ) is the first I'm gonna post! (and maybe the last, who knows?!)
Sorry, it's really late, and I've got no clue what I'm doing right now ~
I'm going to sleep now.
Update:
Sooo, because Rayen told me to, I recorded some of my poetry stuff and this( youtu.be/Ssdn7i_2urQ) is the first I'm gonna post! (and maybe the last, who knows?!)
Sorry, it's really late, and I've got no clue what I'm doing right now ~
I'm going to sleep now.
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Refreshing read 
I hope you don't mind, but I had imagined the narrator as a zombie after considering the poem, lol.
I hope you don't mind, but I had imagined the narrator as a zombie after considering the poem, lol.